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Incarceration

Chapter 5

House's eyes opened even wider than usual. "Have I completely lost my shit or am I seeing two Wilsons??"

Danny Wilson muttered, "oh, he was bothering me because he thought I was James," quietly under his breath.

James Wilson, on the visitors' side of the glass, smiled slightly and said, "Well, as a matter of fact, House, you ARE seeing two Wilsons. If you had stuck around to meet Danny that one time, you would have found out he looks just like me. People think we're twins."

"No damn kidding, you even both have that fucking lazy eye." House didn't know whether to be frustrated or relieved that at least his friend wasn't in prison and had not rejected him. He thought, "Okay, that does it. The second I get out of here and Wilson and I have any privacy, I'm going to tell him I love him."

Chase said, "Nobody's seen you around the hospital lately, Wilson, what's going on?"

Wilson looked a little embarrassed. "I'm sorry, I probably should have told you." He indicated a middle aged, professional looking African-American lady standing slightly behind him. "This is Elizabeth Grant."

"Good afternoon, gentlemen." She shook hands with Foreman and Chase.

"She's a lawyer and she's working with me to get Danny transferred out of prison and into a mental hospital, which is where he should be, because he's schizophrenic. We're also going to see if we can get you out of here, House, or at least get your time shortened."

"Please," House said softly.

Wilson looked at House with sympathy and affection. "In the meantime, I'm going to come and visit you every chance I can get."

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3/9/11 19:00 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] damigella-314.livejournal.com
So lovely! And sure enough you always have something happening, you're so creative! Keep writing!

PS The monitor is really just a minor thing, honey: I can never begin repaying your kindness appropriately, nor your roomie's. You both made me feel so much at home. Thank you.

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3/9/11 19:35 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] chocolate-frapp.livejournal.com
awww. thanks sweetie!

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3/9/11 19:52 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] srsly-yes.livejournal.com
Aha! Mystery solved. However I'm eager for more. :-)

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3/9/11 20:51 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] chocolate-frapp.livejournal.com
there will be more.

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3/9/11 20:21 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] cuddyclothes.livejournal.com
Nicely done...I did not see that twist coming!

Teeny nit-pick: Wilson's last line seemed OOC.

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3/9/11 20:48 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] chocolate-frapp.livejournal.com
Wilson is being a little more emotional than usual here, admittedly.

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3/9/11 22:08 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] cuddyclothes.livejournal.com
It's not so much the emotion as the phrasing. Imagine either you saying that or Wilson saying that (in Wilson's voice using the manner he displays on the show). IDK if that makes any sense. Or have a male friend read that line to you.

I nit-pick because I care! As for the rest of it, I'm enjoying your story a lot.

Edited 3/9/11 22:10 (UTC)

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3/9/11 23:36 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] remydoodle.livejournal.com
{{{{{HUGS}}}}} your Wilson!

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4/9/11 21:11 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] chocolate-frapp.livejournal.com
Super Wilson to the rescue!

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4/9/11 00:26 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] hughville.livejournal.com
Ahh, it was Danny!

Yay for Wilson coming and bringing help.

Ahem. MOOOOOOOAAAAAAARRRRRRR!!! Please. :)

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4/9/11 21:08 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] chocolate-frapp.livejournal.com
MOAR will be coming!

Interested

21/9/11 14:00 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kirkshomegirl61.livejournal.com
I like this story. It has great potential. The chapters are awfully short though. It makes for a choppy read.

Re: Interested

21/9/11 16:48 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] chocolate-frapp.livejournal.com
think of these as the scenes going on in between the medical scenes and stuff like Foreman getting used to having House's old job, etc.