Good mastery of the monologues of both characters - though I spotted a couple of expressions I've heard you use, that I couldn't picture them using "bloody ages" and having been "around the block a few times."
Otherwise, I could imagine the actors' voices with great ease.
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Date: 2010-07-21 04:26 pm (UTC)From:Otherwise, I could imagine the actors' voices with great ease.
Very nicely done.